Friday, March 7, 2014

Essay Revising

To see what I'm referring to, go to my writing tab.

There wasn't a whole lot of things that I had to revise, one concluding sentence sounded funky. I just changed it up a little. I like my second version better because I now saw what I should have done better. I learned when you write, put it aside for a little while, so you can later see what you did wrong.

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